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三隻小豬，以野狼觀點為導向的反面寫法。

The Three Little Pigs

It was an extremely cold winter. There was nothing to eat. The weather became very unstable. My body felt very weak, because I was always starving. I wished that I could become a plant-eating animal in the jungle, so I could feed myself whenever I was hungry. Spring arrived silently in a surrounding rush of colours. After going a long time without eating, I felt like I was dying. I experienced dizziness, hypoglycaemia, and almost became unconscious. To stop my hunger, I drank some water from a pond. From my reflection in the pond, I found that my face had become very skinny, like the American singer, Frank Sinatra. I couldn't believe my eyes! Usually I had a very pump face, like Elvis Presley. My God! I needed to eat somthing right away. A delicious pork chop would be ideal.

I raised my nose as high as possible, just like a radar antenna. I tried very hard to pick up the scent of animal, but my efforts were in vain. I eventually roared at a tree and, finally, I smelt somthing special. According to the data bank in my mind, the scent belonged to the most fresh and tender pork. This pig was of the best quality. It was clean and healthy, and met the picky standard of my stomach. I opened my eyes wide and tried to determine where the smell was coming from. Finally, I locked my target on to a secret place, which had been perfectly camouflaged. The delicious meal would be present soon. My mouth filled with water, like Niagara Falls. If there had been a fire, I could have used my mouth water to extinguish it. At that moment, I began to creep, like a sneaky killer, towards the residence of the little pigs...


昔日師評︰她很欣賞首段的介紹（特別是比較式的對比寫法）。
- I really enjoyed this introduction! (Especially the comparisons that you used.)

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